假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。
增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词。
删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。
修改:在错的词下划一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词。
注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词;
2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分。
A smile is great importance to us because it has magic powers. It can not only refresh us mentally but also keep us closely to each other.
Last week, I take part in an English corner for the first time. When I arrived there, I felt so nervous that I had no idea what to express myself. Then the enthusiastic boy came up with a big smile on his face. He told me he felt the same way the first time that he came to the activity. He encouraged me to open my mouth and spoke English bravely. Then he introduced me to some other people and anyone present greeted me with a smile, it made me feel comfortable and confident.
I don’t remember what I said that day, but their smiling faces remains fresh in my memory.
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Last week, I take part in an English corner for the first time. When I arrived there, I felt so nervous that I had no
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idea what to express myself. Then the enthusiastic boy came up with a big smile on his face. He told me he felt the
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same way the first time that he came to the activity. He encouraged me to open my mouth and spoke English bravely.
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Then he introduced me to some other people and anyone present greeted me with a smile, it made me feel
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comfortable and confident.
I don’t remember what I said that day, but their smiling faces remains fresh in my memory.
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