假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你校英国留学生 Jim 暂时留在英国不能回校，但是他邮寄来的摄影作品 “ 桃花 （ peach blossom ） ” 在你校 “ 春天（ Spring ） ” 摄影展获得一等奖，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括：
1. 祝贺获奖；
2. 介绍展出情况。
注意 : 1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Jim,
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Yours,
Li Hua
Dear Jim,
How are you getting along in the UK these days? I am writing to tell you some good news: your photograph “peach blossom” has won first prize in the photography exhibition “Spring”! Congratulations!
It was your creative composition and the vivid color that made your photograph stand out. Moreover, the bird on the branch was especially impressive because it demonstrated the energetic spring in your hometown and revealed a sense of vigor and hope.
All the photographs are now on display in the school gallery, each capturing a unique aspect of spring: some present vibrant scenes; some stress new hope and life and others celebrate true human emotion. What a success!
It is really unfortunate that you can’t come to appreciate all the exquisite photographs in person. To remedy this, I’ll attach three pictures to show what the exhibition is like.
All the best.
Yours,
Li Hua
【分析】
本文是一篇应用文，就英国留学生 Jim 在摄影展获得一等奖表达祝贺。
【详解】
第一步：审题
体裁：应用文
时态：根据提示，时态主要为一般现在时和一般将来时。
结构：总分法
总分法指把主题句作为总说，把支持句作为分说，并以这种方式安排所写内容。
要求：
1. 祝贺获奖；
2. 介绍展出情况。
第二步：列提纲（重点词组）
get along; exhibition; composition; stand out; impressive; demonstrate; reveal; display; capture; vibrant; unfortunate
第三步：连词成句
1. I am writing to tell you some good news: your photograph “peach blossom” has won first prize in the photography exhibition “Spring”! Congratulations!
2. It was your creative composition and the vivid color that made your photograph stand out.
3. Moreover, the bird on the branch was especially impressive because it demonstrated the energetic spring in your hometown and revealed a sense of vigor and hope.
4. All the photographs are now on display in the school gallery, each capturing a unique aspect of spring: some present vibrant scenes; some stress new hope and life and others celebrate true human emotion.
5. It is really unfortunate that you can’t come to appreciate all the exquisite photographs in person.
6. To remedy this, I’ll attach three pictures to show what the exhibition is like.
根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。
第四步：连句成篇（衔接词）
1. 表文章结构顺序： First of all, Firstly/First, Secondly/Second… And then, Finally, In the end, At last （供参考）
2. 表并列补充关系： Moreover
3. 表转折对比关系： However, On the contrary, but, Although+clause( 从句 ), In spite of+n/doing,On the one hand…,On the other hand… Some…,while others…,as for, so…that… （供参考）
4. 表因果关系： Because, As, So, Thus, Therefore, As a result （供参考）连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰。
【点睛】
【 高分句型 1 】 It was your creative composition and the vivid color that made your photograph stand out. ( 运用了强调句 )
【 高分句型 2 】 To remedy this, I’ll attach three pictures to show what the exhibition is like. ( 运用了 what 引导的宾语从句 )